Show Don't Tell Crit

There were a few things higlighted at this crit, they were;

• my approach was to controlled and needed opening up.
• I needed to exploit more materials and think about soft sculpture.
• to be less obvious and think about using different parts of the body.
• maybe thinking about mapping the body and using the body as a shape to work around.
• I needed to make a decission  between whether my work was going to be sculptural or decorative
• it was said the work needed to be more than just about restriction.
• presentation needed to be thought about and maybe I should present the work without human presence, by itself.

Following the show don't tell crits I  decided to alter the design of the piece so that it encompassed the neck, some of the head and maybe the waist. I think this piece of work will be a piece of sculpture based on jewellery that is decorative. Taking influences from tribal dress and jewellery in the sense of colour and shape (geometric shapes and patterns). I will need to take my time on getting the drawings perfect so the pieces fit together well and have a good finish I will take measurements from the body for the sizeing of the piece.